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PLEASE READ THIS: If you fav it, please comment the pic! It's very important to me! Thanks!

DA LEGGERE: Per favore se favvate la foto, commentatela! E' importante per me sapere la vostra opinione... I favs sono graditi, ovviamente, ma preferisco avere critiche, consigli ed opinioni.. grazie!

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The color contrast in this is wonderful, and it is pleasing while unoffensive. You've also captured a lot of great texture on the petals and the center of the flower.

There are a few things which concern me though- one being the stem of the flower. It feels "thin" and almost disconnected from the flower itself, and despite being out of focus it monopolizes a pretty big corner of the composition. The same goes for that leaf in the bottom right. Obviously your focus is the flower, but these big shapes are distracting from the main point. I was also distracted by the top right and left corners- why are they darker than their opposites?

Overall I think this is a pretty good work, although it could definitely be improved if you play around with the focus and composition/centering some. It definitely catched my eye.
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Wonderful! :)

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haha, but it's still beautiful :heart:
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è la nikon, non è mica la tua bravura pft °_°

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ahahaha ma che bello! mi mancavano i tuoi commenti!!! *_*

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La verità è che tu sei così avido di apprezzamenti verso la tua (esagerata) bravura, che qualsiasi cosa scrivo ti va bene, basta che aumenti il numero °_°

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prrrrrrr! :P
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