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Copyright @ Tommaso Guermandi. All rights reserved. My images may not be reproduced in any form without my written permission
Comments are welcome. Credit if you use it! PLEASE READ THIS: If you fav it, please comment the pic! It's very important to me! Thanks! DA LEGGERE: Per favore se favvate la foto, commentatela! E' importante per me sapere la vostra opinione... I favs sono graditi, ovviamente, ma preferisco avere critiche, consigli ed opinioni.. grazie! |
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July 7
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There are a few things which concern me though- one being the stem of the flower. It feels "thin" and almost disconnected from the flower itself, and despite being out of focus it monopolizes a pretty big corner of the composition. The same goes for that leaf in the bottom right. Obviously your focus is the flower, but these big shapes are distracting from the main point. I was also distracted by the top right and left corners- why are they darker than their opposites?
Overall I think this is a pretty good work, although it could definitely be improved if you play around with the focus and composition/centering some. It definitely catched my eye.
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